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DUSK, part two
Author: Mushroom
The very desolate Seme's POV
Rating: You know the drill.
Summary: A conclusion to a dramatic occurrence. The others gnash through the seme's brain. "Just face him," They chant, with much vigor.
Notes: I deleted AN ENTIRE portion of pointless, very porny, horny, and out-of-this-world PORN. FIVE pages were occupied (font size nine, times new roman), full of "What the fuck" sex, so I just had to remove it completely. Although it is fun, yes, and it involves innocent furniture, it is not really that important. It's JUST SEX, that's all. (Wait, how can sex be anything 'just'?) Okay, I take it back. The seme is really cute here. But that doesn't stop me from deleting it. If you're curiosity reaches a point in which you shall comment and convince me to post it, then let me place a quote that is included in the gratuitous sex scene:
"Let's test its durability."
(You may notice that I am allowing them to hit it off in other places other than the traditional bed. It lessens the romance, heightens the kinkpassion. Okay, this is too long.
Let's move on, shall we?
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( The hand placed itself beside his hip. Unclenched. )
Complete list...three more (shorter) chapters and it's all over. ;_;
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